How to Write a Good Paper in the Arts or Social Sciences
By Doug Mann 2016
General
1. Read the question or
statement or topic you’re writing your paper on carefully. Reply to what it
ACTUALLY asks or states, NOT what you imagine it to be asking or stating. Read
over your course outline, especially the sections describing what your
professor expects of you in terms of the length, format, and level of research
involved in the essay. If the outline doesn’t go over these things, ask your
professor in person what he or she expects. Don’t ignore relevant course texts:
at minimum, the marker will think you couldn’t be bothered to buy or read them.
And most importantly, if the topic asks a question, ANSWER IT!
2. Know the basic theorist
or text or media artefact referred to in the topic well. If necessary, consult
a sociological or philosophical dictionary (e.g. the
3. Understanding a
Text: Read over difficult passages twice, preferably after a break.
Highlight key phrases or sentences. Look over your notes, and don’t be afraid
to ask basic questions in class (there are probably others who don’t understand
either). And try to read the text critically.
Writing the Paper
4. Thesis: First
and foremost, figure out what you want to prove (or at least claim) in your
paper: this is called your thesis. State it in the first or second
paragraph.
A Classic Thesis: “All history is the history of class struggles.”
Another Classic Thesis: “Man is born free, yet everywhere he is in chains.”
Good Thesis: “In this paper I will prove that the claims made by Marx in his theory of alienation still apply to modern service-industry labour.”
Bad Thesis: “There are many theories of advertising. Some think it is a good thing, some think it’s bad. In this paper I will explore some of these theories.”
Really Bad Thesis: “I watched Fight Club last night. It’s a totally confusing film. I’ll talk about some scenes in the movie in this paper.”
Super Bad Thesis: “I’ve got work in other courses, so I didn’t have time to work on this paper. Also, I was sick. So here goes nothing.”
Non-Thesis: “Smith thinks that
consumerism creates freedom. Jones thinks it imprisons us in false hopes. I’ll
discuss both of them.”
5. Arguments and
Language: A good theory paper tries to prove its thesis by making good arguments,
backed up by social and historical data and examples, or by reference to the
cultural genre or work being explored there. These include both logical
arguments (“if x and y are true, then z must follow”) and empirical ones (facts
and examples that support your case). When using logical arguments, it’s
important to define your key terms: e.g. if you want to argue that “all
political ideas are reflections of an underlying material substructure”, define
what you mean by “material substructure.”
There’s
nothing wrong with expressing emotions
in a theory paper, as long as these can be backed up by good argument, and are
therefore not purely personal (e.g. “I feel globalisation is wrong!” Why should
I care what you feel, if I don’t share this feeling? Tell me why
I should share it!).
Think
of yourself as a defense attorney defending a client
against a criminal charge. It’s up to you to convince the jury that your client
is innocent using facts and arguments.
The
client is your thesis.
As
for the use of the first-person pronoun,
use it when you have to, but it’s usually easy to omit, e.g. the statement “I
believe that our PM is very charismatic” means exactly the same thing as the
statement “our PM is very charismatic”.
You could say “I went to
There’s
also nothing wrong (although some more conservative theorists would disagree
with this point) with using metaphorical language in your paper, including
analogies: they help to keep the reader awake. Just make sure they have some
point. The same goes for humour, which is a largely a lost art in undergraduate
papers.
6. Organization: Organize
your paper rationally - an outline is useful in this respect. Well organized
papers reflect well organized thinking. Don’t repeat the same point 5 or 6
times: once or twice is sufficient. If you do, it looks like you’re adding
needless filler to a thin paper.
In
general, it’s wise to start by presenting your weaker or less significant
arguments first, ending with the strong ones. If you have the space, it’s good
to spend some time refuting one or two major counter-arguments to your thesis
in the middle of your paper. Don’t spend two pages summarizing points you’ve
already made in your “conclusion”: keep this short and sweet. Tell the reader
something they don’t already know.
This
is very important: don’t pull a thesis
rabbit out of your hat in the last two pages! No surprise endings! The
whole point of a good university essay is to argue for a specific
position - if the reader doesn’t know what this position is, he or she
won’t be amazed when you tell them in the last paragraph.
Read the course outline: most professors will
say something about what they expect in an essay somewhere in their outlines. Proofread your paper. Then proofread it
again. If your professor asks for three legitimate i.e. non-Internet sources,
then read and discuss at least three such sources. University essays aren’t
like Big Macs you can order and consume in ten minutes: you have to make them
yourself, and you have to make sure they’re big and tasty sandwiches of
relevant information and sound arguments!
7. Vocabulary: Define
all key terms that aren’t common currency. DO NOT use words you’re not sure the meaning of - if you do, the marker
is likely to get a chuckle, but at your expense. I found that the best way to
become a literate speaker of the English language was to always have my handy
Anders
Henriksson, a history professor, has written a whole
book about unintentionally comical things students have said in essays - things
like Jesus said “the mice shall inherit the Earth”, or that during the Gulf
War “Satan Husane invaided
Kiwi and Sandy Arabia.” You don’t want to be featured in his second edition.
Avoid buzzwords such as “proactive” (a Simpsons episode actually mocks someone using this term), bureaucratic jargon like “individuals”, “males” and “females” (say “people”, “men” and “women”), along with non-existent words such as “relatable.” You’re not a cop on Law and Order. Sadly, many students try to use a level of vocabulary they don’t understand to impress a reader with their intelligence or a misplaced political correctness. If you don’t know it, don’t use it!
Here’s
the Cambridge Advanced Learner’s Dictionary, which offers simple and clear
definitions: http://dictionary.cambridge.org
Here’s
the Merriam-Webster Online Dictionary and Thesaurus, with somewhat more complex
information: http://www.merriam-webster.com
8. Beware the Weasel!: Don’t pad your essay
with fluff or weasel phrases, e.g. “The abortion question has been debated for
centuries by many intelligent people. No real answer can be given to the moral
dilemma involved.” Similarly, don’t start your paper with a vague and
ultimately meaningless claim such as “Inequality goes back to the days of the
dinosaurs, it has no solution!” As tempting as it may be to avoid making any
substantive claims in your paper, don’t be a weasel: get to the point early,
and state that point clearly!
9. Facts: Get your facts straight.
For example, if you want to claim that a loss of religious values has caused
divorce rates in Canada to rise over the last 20 years, find some statistical
evidence that shows that divorce rates have in
fact risen in that period. Don’t guess. The same advice applies to
historical events: use a reference source to check dates and basic information,
e.g. if you want to make some claim about the Enlightenment affecting the
French Revolution, find out when it took place, why it took place, and something
about the role of Enlightenment ideas in the political rhetoric of its leaders.
Many students make empirical claims like “no one want to read books any more”
without backing these up with evidence.
10. Basic Texts: Do
not attempt to communicate telepathically with the major theorist you’re
focussing on in your paper when analyzing their ideas: use the primary texts
listed on the course outline that are relevant to your topic, and then add
further research. Do NOT rely exclusively on lecture or web pages in this
regard: it gives the appearance that you couldn’t be bothered to read the
course materials. Example: if you’re writing a paper on Marx’s theory of
alienation, actually read the relevant Marx text (in this case the 1844
Manuscripts), and quote or paraphrase it in your essay.
Essays
which analyze a major theorist purely through sketchy web notes or through a
secondary source largely unrelated to the theorist in question are seen by
markers as HIGHLY suspicious - did you actually come to class? Or read the
course texts? Have you recycled an unrelated paper from another course by
changing a few sentences to make it tangentially fit into this course? This is
becoming more and more of a problem in the age of Web 2.0, when some students
are tempted to write a whole essay without ever opening the covers of a book so
they can return to their cell texts and Facebook
pages ASAP. Note that copyright laws still prevent the majority of books in
print from being legally available online.
11. Language Skills: Spelling, grammar and
syntax
are VERY important, style FAIRLY important. Good spelling, grammar and sentence
structure show clarity of expression and basic literacy (after all, you should
be able to speak and write English by first-year university!), while style
shows some individuality and some passion for your material. This is true for
ALL social science, humanities and related courses, not just English courses
proper. Good language skills developed during your university tenure will stay
with you much longer and will probably be of greater utility than most of the
specific information you’ve learned in your courses. I’ve found that in almost
ALL cases, people who can think clearly
are also people who can write clearly,
and vice versa. A paper with fifty grammar errors is unlikely to be chock full
of brilliant ideas.
And
besides, a difficult-to-read paper, one that’s full of spelling and grammar
mistakes, will give the marker a headache as a result of having to make the
necessary corrections. It’s like trying to understand someone who’s mumbling:
they might have something important to say, but you just can’t make it out, and
eventually you get tired of trying. You can be sure that if you make the
marker’s life difficult, you probably won’t be happy with the grade he or she
gives you. The Buddha may be right
that all life is suffering: but there’s no reason you have to add to that
suffering by handing in a sloppily written paper. Note that all modern
word processors have automatic spelling
and grammar checkers, so if you don’t correct these, it’s your own fault
(though our mediocre high schools should bear some of the blame).
If you’re still not convinced, imagine failing to get your dream job because your cover letter is full of mistakes, or you struggle to form meaningful sentences in the interview.
A Note on Punctuation: Use commas at “pauses”
in your sentences, semi-colons to separate independent clauses, colons and
dashes to separate phrases that are juxtaposed to each other. If you’re not
sure, read your paper out loud, trying to imagine where the punctuation should
go. It works best if you adopt a Shakespearian style as you read it. Here’s a
simple punctuation guide that could save you a lot of headaches:
http://www.how-to-study.com/study-skills/en/10.asp
12. Presentation and References: Always type or word-process your papers, double-spacing (except for long quotes), with 1-inch margins and 11-12 point text. You do not have to use Times Roman, but avoid the goofier fonts. Stick more or less to the length the professor has asked for. Don’t put fancy covers on your papers: just staple the upper left corner. Use a standard referencing system - the MLA is strongly preferred - to give the sources of the quotes, paraphrases, and other information taken from external sources. Here’s a brief style guide that’s easy to follow:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/MLA_Handbook_for_Writers_of_Research_Papers
Markers
prefer either footnotes, or internal references such as the following:
Some noted theorists claim that “the rain in
In
the above example, Smith and Laflamme have two
entries in your bibliography, while Jones only has one, thus you have to
include the year to distinguish the two works by each author. Make sure you
list all the works you consulted while writing your paper alphabetically in
your bibliography at the end of the paper, including web pages (list the author
of the web page, if known, its title, along with its web address). Endnotes are
more difficult for the marker to refer to, and should definitely be avoided.
Either MLA or APA-style
bibliographical styles are fine, though retyping a full bibliographical entry a
dozen types at the bottom of the page seems pointless to me. Here’s an
MLA-style set of bibliographical entries (they’re fictional):
Jones,
Cyrano. “Deconstructing Rainfall Statistics.” The Journal of Wet Things 34.2 (1999): 77-99.
Laflamme, Louis . “Yellow Rain: Myth or Fact?” Scientific American 77: January
2007, pp. 44-66.
Laflamme, Louis. “What is Rain?” A Book
of Essays on Rainfall. Ed. Jennifer J. Macadam.
Smith,
Yardley. Rainfall in
Smith, Yardley. “I Love the Rain.” Rainy Day
Stories. Ed. Annie
And here’s some audio and
video references:
The Matrix.
Written and Directed by Larry and Andy Wachowski.
Warner Brothers, 1999.
“33”.
Battlestar Galatica. Written by
Ronald D. Moore. Directed by Michael Rymer. Episode
1.1. Scifi Channel,
Spears,
Britney. “Gimme More.” Blackout. 2007.
You must source all of your quotes and
paraphrases, or else you’re flirting with plagiarism.
If you quote an author in the main text of your paper, make sure that author’s
work is listed in the bibliography. If you don’t, you’re at best sloppy, at
worst, a plagiarist. Many professors insist on a minimum number of academic
sources for your papers. The proper use of references proves that you’ve done
this.
13. Creativity: A
good essay shows some attempt at uniqueness and creativity, some attempt to go
beyond the lectures and readings in coming to grips with the topic. Ideally,
social and cultural theory and cultural studies are living conversations, not
just resurrections of dead ideas. The marker doesn’t want to read over and over
again exactly the same examples and explanations given in the lectures and
texts: he or she is no doubt already familiar with the basic ideas contained in
these.
14. Excuses: Some professors will accept
pressing excuses for late papers. Others just automatically deduct some part of
the grade. DO NOT simply assume that a professor will accept late work at full
grade value: the other students and professors have work to do and lives to
live too! Here’s some classic bad excuses for late or
substandard work (this list is a work in progress):
I was too busy (in some undefined manner).
I drank too much last night (it was St. Patrick’s Day!).
My History prof lets me hand in things late! You should too!
I had a cold/the flu/smallpox/a rare South American virus I caught from a monkey at the zoo!
I had an Economics assignment to hand in, and after all, Economics is more important than your course, so I did it first (this will NOT ingratiate you with any self-respecting marker on this planet!).
This isn’t an English course! Whad’ya mean I gotta spell good? Grammer is fur losers! Gess I gotta re-rite it. Coarse evaluation: “1/7 - prof sucks.”
My grandmother died for the third time this year (it turns out she’s an
unkillable zombie).
My computer crashed! I have to wait until it gets fixed! (which omits the obvious fact that there are probably
hundreds of easily available computers in student labs around campus).
You mean there’s an essay in this course? I guess I should have read the course outline before November.
You mean there’s a course outline? I thought you were making it all up as you went along!
I have a part-time job that prevents me from writing papers between September and April.
Please... please... please... (accompanied by
sobbing, tears, anguished cries, hair pulling, etc.).
15. Bad Grades: Papers that ignore the
advice pointed out in points 4 to 14 are usually graded as no better than C+.
Here are some GUARANTEED reasons for getting a mediocre grade on a paper:
Multiple spelling mistakes, vocabulary and punctuation errors, bad grammar, weak syntax (sentence structure)
Factual errors and the misquoting of key authors
Simply ignoring the relevant reading(s), especially course texts
Making assertions without supporting them'
Substituting a list of ideas or facts for a good argument
Adding irrelevant material, including making excuses for the paper being late or sub-standard in the body of the paper
Revealing your thesis in
the very last paragraph (wow, I didn't see that coming!)
16. Fairness: Surprisingly or not,
although some TAs and profs mark harder than others, they usually agree on the
same serial scale for a given group of papers i.e. Professor A would rank
papers X, Y, and Z in the same order as Professor B, although one might give
paper X an A and the other an A-. So although marking isn’t entirely
objective (indeed, little in life is), it isn’t entirely subjective
either.
If you are disappointed by an essay grade, don’t
spend the rest of the term sulking, convinced that the TA or Professor hates
you, or “is a real jerk”. It’s far more likely that relative to the other
papers he or she graded, you got what you deserved. It may be hard to believe,
but markers usually don’t take out their frustrations on students. Getting
“even” with a TA or professor on evaluations if they’ve taught a good class but
given you low marks is petty and immature: your teachers ARE NOT out to get
you! Think of them like referees in a hockey or soccer game: it’s up to you to
win the game. We’re just here to enforce the (academic) rules.
17. Don’t be a Badger! Generally speaking, professors and TAs have good
reasons for giving you the mark that you got. It’s usually not worth it in the
long run to badger a professor for a higher grade UNLESS there’s an adding
mistake or serious inconsistency in the way it was marked or if there were
several TAs and one TA marks much harder than the others. For one thing,
badgering a prof creates bad karma which will
guarantee you several things: (a) no extensions on work in the future; (b)
possibly, lower marks on “close calls” for your other work; (c) the
unlikelihood of being able to take courses from that prof
in the future in a warm and friendly atmosphere; (d) no letters for grad
school.
And
there’s no point in saying that your mark was unfair because you got a higher
mark in another course: this could be because (a) the other marker was afraid
of badgers such as you or inflated his/her grades to buy good evaluations, or
(b) you actually worked harder on the first assignment, so you deserved the
higher grade in the other course, or (c) the courses dealt with different
subject matters, and you were more adept at the topic you chose in the previous
course than on this one. The key to getting higher marks is (believe it or not)
skill and hard work, so put away your badger mask and get out your pen and
highlighter! Don’t waste your time e-mailing a professor to beg for a higher
grade without a good reason to back up your request!
WORST EXCUSE EVER (disgruntled sigh): The worst
reason to ask for a higher grade is because you “need it” to stay in your program, keep a scholarship, graduate with
honours, get into grad school, etc. If everyone got
what they wanted just by asking for it, champagne would flow from public water
fountains, great clouds of ten-dollar bills would fall from the sky and yummy
donuts would magically appear whenever you’re hungry. When you say to a
professor “I need a 70% in your course to stay in my academic program”, most
markers with even a modicum of self-respect are NOT thinking “hmm.... I guess
if he/she really needs the grade, I’d better just give it to them!”
Instead they’re most likely thinking one of the following: “why didn’t you spend
more than two days on your essay? maybe even proofread it?” or “why didn’t you
come to class on a regular basis and not miss that 7% quiz that would have
boosted you to a 70%”, or “if you had only participated more than zero times
you’d have gotten the grade you want legitimately!”.
In my experience, most people who drop below an
important grade barrier (e.g. a 50% pass, a 70% to stay in a program) then
complain about it later have shot themselves in the foot in some obvious way:
missed a lot of classes (and thus don’t know the course material), missed a
quiz or test, not participated in a class with a significant participation
grade, or written a sloppily edited essay at the last minute that ignores the
basic requirements stipulated in the course outline or on a professor’s web
page. To echo Jean-Paul Sartre, be responsible for your actions: don’t blame
your marker for calling you out on something you’ve done
yourself.
18. Plagiarism: Last but not least, DON’T PLAGIARISE! If
you quote an author, reference that quote. The same goes for paraphrases of
texts - indicate where you’re getting the paraphrase from. You don’t need to
reference a commonly known fact or widely agreed upon idea, e.g. “Paris is the
capital of France”, or “Karl Marx was the father of modern socialism”, or
“World War Two ended in an Allied victory in 1945.” But you do have to
reference more obscure facts and less well known ideas. Footnotes or internal
notes (see point 12 above) are easiest to check for a marker.
And
yes, cutting and pasting from web pages without referencing them counts as
plagiarism. Be warned: most markers know full well how to use search engines
like Google. It’s pretty easy to catch a plagiarist who copies material from the
Internet, so don’t do the crime if you can’t do the time (i.e. at minimum,
getting a 0 on the essay or failing the course). In most of the cases I’ve
discovered, I found the original plagiarised source in less than 5 minutes.
Having said this, avoid excessive quoting. For
example, you can state most matters of opinion in your own words e.g. say
“modern industrial labour is alienated”, as opposed to “According to McLellan, ‘modern industrial labour is alienated’ (McLellan 234).”
19. Virtual Age Note for Technology
Addicts and Sufferers from AADD:
If you’ve gotten this far, this note probably doesn’t apply to you! But read on
anyways. In the last few years more and more students have become addicted to
their cell phones, Blackberries, to online messaging, video games, checking Facebook on their laptops during lectures, admiring their Instagram photos, and other technological marvels.
The
problem with all of these technologies is that they create artificial attention
deficits that clearly affect the quality of your writing (not to mention
preventing you from reading good books, which causes a general decline in
standards of literacy). One can hear lurking in the background of all those
typos, grammar errors, incomplete sentences, and jargonesque
phrases lifted straight out of badly written journal articles the shrill ring
tones of cell phones and the beeps of your friends sending you messages. If you
want to reduce your AADD (Artificial Attention Deficit Disorder) while
writing papers, do the following:
Take the battery out of your cell phone and put it in your closet as you shed a tear and wave goodbye to your best friend for a week or two.
Hide your Playstation/Gameboy/XBox under your sofa. Don’t play video games in the background of your word processor.
DO NOT surf the Internet other than to so serious research. Disable all messenger services.
Turn off your TV. Play some soothing music on your stereo - classical, instrumental, folk, etc. – or turn on an FM radio station with such music.
Every couple of hours go for a walk, have a coffee, eat lunch, or raid the fridge for a break. Get lots of sleep. These breaks (as opposed to last-minute cramming) help to refresh the creative centers of your brain.
Most
importantly, start one or two essays a month before they’re due! So if the
essay is due December 1st, start it on November 1st! Ideally, chose the essay
that is least based on course lectures and start working on it in the second
month of the term: if you can write merely a page per week, it’ll be done long
before it’s due! Pace yourself: academic life is a marathon, not a 100-yard
dash.
20. Addendum for Papers on Film or TV: If your paper is on a TV show, list all the episodes you watched and
took notes on in your bibliography by episode title, show title, episode number
(usually in the format “Season Number-Episode Number” e.g. “Episode 2.6”), and
broadcast date. You may also include the writer of the show, and if you’re
really ambitious the director’s name. The stars don’t matter, since they usually
stay the same over the course of the show. For example:
“The Hand of God.” Battlestar Galatica (2003) Episode 1.10.
Written by David Wheddle and Bradley Thompson.
Directed by Jeff Woolnough. Space Network, November
11, 2005.
You can find numerous episode guides on most
prominent TV shows on the Net which list all of the information mentioned
above. The website www.tv.com is very
comprehensive, with complete episode listings for every show I’ve ever looked
up on it, while www.imdb.com features a massive
database that covers all movies and TV shows ever made.
Films should be listed by director, film title,
and year, with the screenwriter and production company being optional, e.g.:
Lehmann, Michael. Heathers. Written by Daniel Waters. New World Pictures, 1988.
Essays on film and TV shows that don’t list and
directly refer to the video texts they’re based on are by definition failures.
So if you write an essay on Sex and the
City but don’t refer to, quote, or reference any Sex and the City episodes, then you really haven’t done your job
properly, have you? Be thankful if you pass in such a case.
21. Last Minute Gasps of Electronic Desperation: DO NOT e-mail your professor a pile of questions about how
to structure your essay the weekend before it’s due: this only proves that you
have poor time-management skills. It’s smarter to come to your professor or
TA’s office hours or to meet them informally a week or two in advance with your
rough outline and any questions you have about how to proceed. That way you can
clear up any confusions with further questions, as opposed to cajoling or guilting your marker into writing a thousand word e-mail on
a Sunday night to give you the luxury of doing your work at the last moment
(not to mention not having to leave your house or apartment, climbing some
stairs and talking to your professor, which, by the way, are good for you both
physically and psychologically). It’s surprising how many students ignore this
very commonsensical bit of advice and treat their instructors like fast-food
outlets, open 24 hours and always read to serve you.
22. My Iron Laws of Marks (2008)
Methodology: As of this date I’ve taught over fifty classes comprised of thousands
of students, and come to some fairly well supported conclusions about the
relationships between certain types of student behaviour
and the grades they get in my classes. Here’s a summary of my findings. 2016 Update: my conclusions here still stand
up pretty well.
Note:
These are all statistical correlations, meaning that they are “usually” true,
though they admit of individual exceptions. “Strong Correlation” means that the
relationship holds true in 80% or more cases. “Weak Correlation” means that the
relationship holds true in 65% or more cases. “Inverse Correlation” means that
as factor X increases, factor Y decreases, e.g. more partying = lower grades.
1.
ATTENDANCE: There is a Strong Correlation between attending
class on a regular basis and getting an A or B. The majority of students with
grades of C or lower skip class on a regular basis. This is easily explained:
if you come to class, you’ll know the material better, do not miss any quizzes,
and can participate.
2.
SEATING: There is Strong Correlation between sitting in
the front row of class and getting an A or B. Conversely, there is a Weak
Correlation between sitting as far from the professor as possible, usually in
the back row, and getting a grade of C or less. Students who get a D or F
almost ALWAYS skip a significant number of classes, sit at the back, and play
with their digital devices during class. Again, this is easily explained:
students who sit near the front are more cognitively
and emotionally engaged in the class materials and discussions. This
doesn’t really apply to small seminar-style classes, where the seats are
arranged in a semi-circle or square (though the “rule of furthest distance from
the professor equals lower marks” still has some validity).
In some cases, I can roughly predict grades half
way through the very first class based on where you sit, on your level of
participation, and on your cell phone/laptop use.
3.
ELECTRONIC DISENGAGEMENT: The is a Strong
Correlation between students who regularly distract themselves with electronic
communications devices – cell phones and laptops (on which they text, surf, use
Facebook or play games) – and students who get a B-
or less in a given class. There is also a Strong Correlation between (a)
students who print off class notes, come to class without any electronic
devices and listen to lectures/discussions and (b) students who get an A or a
B.
This is a chicken-or-egg issue: students who are
disengaged electronically don’t process the information being offered in class;
yet the fact that they come to class with these devices and programs in place
shows their intention to ignore the lecture/discussion taking place in the
class. So which comes first, the intellectual disengagement, or the electronic
devices? It doesn’t matter: they create a vicious feedback loop.
4.
PARTICIPATION: Though there are quiet but
bright students, there is a Weak Correlation between students who participate
on a regular basis and getting a grade of B or better. This becomes a Strong
Correlation in classes with significant, i.e. 10% or better, participation
grades. Participators have more emotional stake in the course material, and are
more likely to remember key facts and issues addressed in class.
5.
RESEARCH: There is a Strong Correlation between doing
serious research, i.e. reading books and scholarly articles, and getting an A
on an essay. There is a Weak Correlation between those who do most of their
research online and getting a mediocre (72% or lower) essay grade.
Case Study: Pop Culture 2008
To illustrate my Iron Laws, I include data from an actual class I
taught, which I’ll call “Pop Culture 2008” to protect the anonymity of the
students in it.
There were 40 students in this class. Of the ten
students who got an 80% or better, all attended class on a regular basis, with
six sitting literally in the front row of the class, the other four in the
middle. Only four or five of these ten students brought laptops to class on a
regular basis, with none of them appearing to be electronically disengaged.
Five participated pretty well every class, three occasionally.
The student with the highest grade on her essay
had four books, one scholarly article and no Internet sources listed in her
works cited. She had probably done the most solid research in the class, i.e.
read the greatest number of published pages in print. Students with grades of
C+ or less on their essays tended to rely on short Web-based sources for much
of their research.
Of the ten students with the lowest grades, C or
less, seven were chronic truants, the other three missing a quarter to a third
of classes. Seven or eight sat fairly consistently in the back row of the class
(when they bothered to attend it), while six or seven were “electronically
disengaged” due to laptop play and/or cell phone or Blackberry use. Three
participated occasionally, about every third class; one talked a few times;
while the other six never talked. The three students with the lowest grades (a)
all skipped at least seven or eight classes each, (b) never participated, (c)
sat in the back row for most classes they attended, and (d) were distracted by
electronic devices on a regular basis.
Overall,
all five of my Iron Laws were validated by grades in this class. Although there
were a few participators with disappointing grades, these seemed to be
connected to disengagement from studying and research.
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